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Sazanami
by
The Battōsai
by
The Battōsai
ACROSS
1. Deputy
not first with Indiana order (6-2-7)
9. Cheese dish by one in complicated barter (7)
10. Recover lost miracle (7)
11. Live longer outside roofless hut for fruit (5)
12. Upcoming increase in lease fee (9)
13. Indifference toward mid-branching in rogue mitosis (8)
15. Alienated, confused manic has nothing (6)
18. Outclassed by humming bee having dined (6)
19. It is a superstitious idea that colour changes act (5,3)
22. Worsen tax covered by cluttered garage (9)
24. Save for some recreation with minister (5)
25. Admire odd solid in popular browser (7)
26. Wrong move being away from site with Daniels for Tea (7)
27. Register Station in disarray by selective inflammation (15)
9. Cheese dish by one in complicated barter (7)
10. Recover lost miracle (7)
11. Live longer outside roofless hut for fruit (5)
12. Upcoming increase in lease fee (9)
13. Indifference toward mid-branching in rogue mitosis (8)
15. Alienated, confused manic has nothing (6)
18. Outclassed by humming bee having dined (6)
19. It is a superstitious idea that colour changes act (5,3)
22. Worsen tax covered by cluttered garage (9)
24. Save for some recreation with minister (5)
25. Admire odd solid in popular browser (7)
26. Wrong move being away from site with Daniels for Tea (7)
27. Register Station in disarray by selective inflammation (15)
DOWN
1. Nothing
in false issuer to be thoughtful (7)
2. Cancer caused by king-based setup without Hillary and Lincoln (9)
3. Tricky lob into the upper right was splendid (5)
4. Damaged entire street for gain (8)
5. Not very bad service for colour (6)
6. Denoting language using bad 2D, or by cooking Chef's macaroni (9)
7. Lawyer back on time for saying (5)
8. Popular medic? No? Doctor has Tetanus for Necrosis (7)
14. Chant around broken vial for knight (9)
16. This manic out of sorts is an operator (9)
17. Live outside - back to urinate in peculiar lotus? (5,3)
18. Direction to beg around falling rain (7)
20. Container returned with a smaller amount is not fully covered (7)
21. Ready with Terry and Elliot for special cell (6)
23. Definition for good loss (5)
24. Cracked software missing "retweet centre" till now (2,3)
2. Cancer caused by king-based setup without Hillary and Lincoln (9)
3. Tricky lob into the upper right was splendid (5)
4. Damaged entire street for gain (8)
5. Not very bad service for colour (6)
6. Denoting language using bad 2D, or by cooking Chef's macaroni (9)
7. Lawyer back on time for saying (5)
8. Popular medic? No? Doctor has Tetanus for Necrosis (7)
14. Chant around broken vial for knight (9)
16. This manic out of sorts is an operator (9)
17. Live outside - back to urinate in peculiar lotus? (5,3)
18. Direction to beg around falling rain (7)
20. Container returned with a smaller amount is not fully covered (7)
21. Ready with Terry and Elliot for special cell (6)
23. Definition for good loss (5)
24. Cracked software missing "retweet centre" till now (2,3)
Author’s
Note
Sazanami is the Japanese equivalent of ripple.
I wanted my first crossword to be at least a small ripple in the infinite ocean of cryptic crosswords.
Reviews welcome on THCC or at kenshin.thebattosai@live.com with the subject XWord and an in-mail reference to the crossword title.
I wanted my first crossword to be at least a small ripple in the infinite ocean of cryptic crosswords.
Reviews welcome on THCC or at kenshin.thebattosai@live.com with the subject XWord and an in-mail reference to the crossword title.
To attempt the crossword on a separate page follow the link SAZANAMI
Enjoy.
1d. Nothing in false issuer to be thoughtful (7) SERI(O)US*
ReplyDelete7d. Lawyer back on time for saying (5) AD<- AGE
24d. Cracked software missing "retweet centre" till now (2,3) SO FAR (SOF[tw]AR[e])
At first I thought it was an anag. after del., but soon thereafter I realised that after deleting the letters, we are left with the answer; so 'cracked' isn't an anag. ind.)
I made a mistake. I had considered SOFAR to be gotten after SOFTWARE is anagrammed. Sorry.
ReplyDeleteIdea was (stupidly) SOFTWARE* = SO(TWE)FAR; SOTWEFAR-TWE = SO FAR. :)
DeleteOh, I see! We have to anagram the letters and then remove TWE ! Which is so true in what you have written. But not everyone might anagram the same way to get the non-word with the letters TWE in contiguity. Don't worry! It was fun.
DeleteIt was a blatant error on my part. I'll take care that it doesn't happen again. Thanks. :) I would've not noticed it till someone pointed it out.
Delete9.A.REAREBIT. *I+BARTER
ReplyDeleteKindly correct the spelling.
DeleteSORRY RAREBIT
Delete27A GASTROENTERITIS *{Register Station}
ReplyDelete4D INTEREST *{entire st}
10.A.RECLAIM. *MIRACLE
ReplyDelete10A - RECLAIM - MIRACLE*
ReplyDelete25A - IDOLISE - I(SOLID*)E
7D - ADAGE - DA <-- AGE
Corrects a typo in the given answer.
ReplyDelete9a.RAREBIT (I+BARTER)*
Compensating 10A
ReplyDelete1A - SECOND IN COMMAND - NOT FIRST + INDIANA + ORDER
All criticisms will be taken in a constructive manner. :)
ReplyDeleteKindly email your comments or post them here right away.
All criticisms will be taken in a constructive manner. :)
Delete...as long as they are made constructively!
But aren't criticisms constructed (with words)?
DeleteHence any criticism can be taken in a constructive manner.
JK
13A . Indifference toward mid-branching in rogue mitosis (8)
ReplyDeleteSTOICISM (C+MITOSIS)
mitosis - "an elaborate process of cell division involving the arrangement of chromosomes in definite figures" (Chambers)
Delete22A- AGGRAVATE- (GAR {VAT} AGE*) def- Worsen
ReplyDelete4D- INTEREST (ENTIRE ST)* def- Gain
18D- BEARING (BE{RAIN}* G) def- Direction
I have watched the Japanese Anime- Kenshin and I absolutely love it! :D
You do not know what that comment did to me.
DeleteIt can't be described with the words I know.
So let's just say it brought smiles, and leave it at that.
:)
Whoa! :D Kenshin, Kaoru, Yahiko, Sanosuke, Misao, Aoshi, Saito....it's simply epic! I especially liked Season 2 where they are fighting against Makoto Shishio! :D
Delete6.D.MACARONIC. *C+MACARONI
ReplyDeleteAre the people here Anagram-Gods? :)
ReplyDeletemacaronic - "used of poetry in which vernacular words are given Latin inflections and intermixed with genuine Latin for comic effect; written or including lines in more than one language." (Chambers)
DeleteAh, this is a word that I had learnt quite recently. Don't remember if it was in a Guardian or some other crossword that I saw or it was a gridfill in a puzzle that I set myself.
Remember, all the gridfills don't come from a setter's head; some might come from a word pattern search software.
JK: BTW, what is that crossword puzzle app that you say you created? Would love to learn about it.
JK was supposed to mean Just Kidding. Now I seriously don't know if you're also JK or if you're referring to me as JK. :)
DeleteI didn't create an app. I was approached to create one by my friend, when I refused because I didn't know GUI (front-end) programming. But he showed me the layout and an example crossie. I love English, and got instantly attracted.
That aside, I'm currently working on a secret project that will help people at THCC (secret)!
Okay, nothing in telling THCC members. After all, it was supposed to be for you. I'm creating an app which allows you to solve crossies on your smart devices by taking a snapshot of the day's The Hindu Crossword. Currently I'm working on recognizing the clues and converting them to digital format, which is in big trouble because of the fonts used in THE HINDU for crossword clues. There is nearly no difference between a capital I and small L in the font. (Actually a difference of 3-5 pixels, which makes it hard to do OCR)
Deletesince JK is Just kidding, if visitors here abbreviate your pseudonym you will become TB!
DeleteThen I hope they don't do that! :)
DeleteThis app already exists and is available through Facebook and Orkut. A separate app is also available for Android devices, look under LINKS on the left hand side panel of this page
DeleteAnd Chaturvasi: I read in some interview of yours that you take 10-15 mins max for any Indian crossie. Unable to place my source at the moment. I also remember it being mentioned that it was because they are set by a single person. Is that correct?
DeleteColonel: If that is so, then all my work will be for naught.
DeleteFrom the app description:
DeleteAn application for solving crosswords published in the popular Indian newspaper daily "The Hindu". This application downloads the grid from the web and converts to an editable format for android applications.
To reiterate my point, I'm creating an app which allows you to digitize any crossword you take a snapshot of. Meaning you snap today's crossie and you can save it in AcrossLite format or something if you want, or just simply solve it on the app. Initially I'm supporting onlt THC, later it will be any crossword. You snap, save, send to a friend, like that. Atleast that's what I'm planning. :)
Not necessarily, your app may turn out to be better.
DeleteColonel: If that is so, then all my work will be for naught.
DeleteFor which price you can sell the app!
JK (truly).
Thanks all.
DeleteI'm done with grid detection and digitization. The OCR is what is failing me. There is so little difference that I's and l's are getting mixed up in the clues I'm recognizing. I don't want this to ruin the user experience so I'm still working on ways to address this issue.
23D. Definition for good loss (5)
ReplyDeleteGLOSS (G+LOSS)
18A. Outclassed by humming bee having dined (6)
ReplyDeleteBEATEN (What is the anno? BEE is there.If it is dined it must be ATE there is one extra E and from where the N came from)
having dined = EATEN
Delete(~BEE)B+EATEN
DeleteWelcome Battosai,
DeleteIs humming a homophone indicator?
That was what I meant it to be.
DeleteSorry if it was unorthodox.
Welcome, The Battosai,
ReplyDeleteArigato, ichi now, ni when?
2d CARCINOMA(monarchical-hl)*
17d SLEEP OUT ((PEE< inside LOTUS*)
19a BLACK CAT (colour=black, act*=cat)
ichi wa zen.
Deletezen wa ichi.
(If you know that reference)
Ni depends on Col. :)
You got moonarchical??!?!?!
And,
DeleteArigato.
I'm doubtful on how often to submit crosswords here. I've actually been drafting and re-drafting an email regarding this to the Col. for about a week now.
I think I've to step up my work if I have to be a regular setter. :) So I'm waiting for a better crossie work from my end before I send in my next submission. Because obviously, a newbie's crossie is solved here in a matter of minutes!
I had to look up the ref. My knowledge of Japanese numbers is just from the dojo.
DeleteMoonarchical?!.... Why extra o. My take:
2. Cancer caused by king-based setup without Hillary and Lincoln (9)
king-based =monarchical
without Hillary and Lincoln, delete HL= monarcica
set up=aind
def=cancer=monarcica*=carcinoma
The moonarchical ref reminded me of Moonswamy...
DeleteI think I'm waiting for comments, while you pros are waiting for the crossie to be completed by others, before giving detailed comments.
Delete7. Live outside - back to urinate in peculiar lotus? (5,3)
ReplyDeleteHave people started peeing in all sorts of places after Ajit Pawar's recent 'damning' advice?
Where is the world going to?
Something nowadays makes me interpret all statements as clues.
DeleteWhere is the world going to? (x)
Is it necessary that I get out of my infatuation with anagrams?
DeleteAre people busy on Tamil New Year that only regulars are here today?
ReplyDeleteLate today
ReplyDelete3D - NOBLE {N(LOB)*E}
15A - ANOMIC {MANIC*+O}
ReplyDelete14D - CHEVALIER {CHE(VIAL)*ER}
ReplyDeleteI don't get the anno for 11A but I'll wait for the answer to be published. Enjoyed the anagrams, Battosai.
ReplyDeleteBTW, no comments on Sir RJs accomplishment yesterday?
Thank you. :)
Delete19 AC. It is a superstitious idea that colour changes act (5,3)BLACK,(CAT*)
ReplyDelete25 AC Admire odd solid in popular browser (7)I(DOLIS*).E
8 DN Popular medic? No? Doctor has Tetanus for Necrosis (7)DEMO(+T)(-n)IC
Not so familiar a word.
Deletedemotic adj relating to the people; popular (Chambers)
demotic actually means popular with respect to a certain group of people, esp. colloquially popular. Am I wrong?
Delete19 & 25 AC already taken so compensating:
ReplyDelete20.Dn Container returned with a smaller amount is not fully covered (7) (TOP<-)LESS
21. Ready with Terry and Elliot for special cell (6)GAM(E T)E
Corr:
ReplyDelete21. Ready with Terry and Elliot for special cell (6)GAME(T E)
Arigato, Battosai: Good for starters on a Sunday. My clue of the day is:14 day. well conceived and of course that soft ware appn you're trying out. Please do share with us so that we can make use of them, but in plain English and computerese.
ReplyDeleteHave you been solving Japanese crosswords?
Arigato.
DeleteIiya. Not been solving any Japanese crosswords. Don't even know how they'd look!
I have seen - not solved - some Japanese puzzles known as 'nanograms'.
DeleteThe puzzle has a title and a rectangle. The rectangle is a grid with blank cells (no blacks or blocks). There are figures (numbers) at the top and left of the grid.
It would seem that by interpreting the numbers we have to click on certain cells so they become blocked.
When the puz is done, the blocked/color-filled cells form a picture matching the title.
I've seen them too, but I think they're NONOGRAMs.
Deletecorrection: My clue of the day is 14 down and not 14 day !! NOT computerese !
ReplyDeletewonder how a Japanese crossword will look like with all their hieroglyphic alphabets ! I'll ask my son in Nagoya to send me some.
In a hurry to close down the PC as the Power Gods have shut me off already !!
12A-
ReplyDeleteUpcoming- Def.- Resurgent
Increase- Surge
Lease value- Rent
(surge)in (rent)
Nice and interesting CW (debut?) Thank you The Battosai (I am not abbreviating!) & Col.
Happy Tamil New Year's day & Vishu for everyone.
Arigato.
DeleteHai, debut.
And a second arigato for not abbreviating! :D
What I meant was it is too good for a debut!
DeleteArigato again.
DeleteKishore
ReplyDeleteI have seen cartoons on Moonswamy. was it TOI? or IE?
It can't be IE. Moonswamy was a creation of Mario Miranda and published in the ET (and in the 'Jest a minute' page of the IWOI before it folded up) in the strip which also starred Boss, Ms Fonseca of the polka dotted skirt fame, Ms Nimbupani and a mantriji whose name I forget.
DeleteI can recall all those characters from the time of the IWoI. The polka dots on Ms Fonseca's skirt had a tale of their own.
DeleteRight !
Deleteand Left :-)
Bundaldas !
DeleteA really apt name for a minister full of hot air....
DeleteI think they reproduced in The Mail which was in print at that time since I could not have seen any of the other dailies mentioned by you. I remember all those characters as also the polka dots! Alt. it could have been Shankar's weekly with the famous Sotto Voce. Kishore & CV may be knowing about it.
DeleteLeftovers
ReplyDeleteAcross - 11, 24 & 26
Down - 5 & 16
16D- Machinist- (this manic)*
ReplyDelete24A- Skimp- save
ReplyDeleteRecreation- Skip
Minister- M
It was supposed to be SKI(-ING)+MP
DeleteI did solve it.
DeleteThe clue is unconventional.
To get SKI we have to think of SKING (from 'recreation') and then from the word 'some' preceding it we have to derive SKI (dropping ING). This is a stretch, I think.
I wouldn't consider Minister as the aptest of indications for MP but one might argue that not every MP is a Minister but every Minister is certainly an MP. 'Politician', 'member', 'representative'. 'lawmaker' and other possibilities exist.
Oh! I used minister straight away because I saw it in a THC. Thanks!
DeleteSince my Japanese is limited to edamame and the like, I had to look lup Sazanami. Reminded me of Blondie from the sphaghetti westerns and Joe Millard's Dollar books.
ReplyDeleteI think I have mentioned what sazanami is. :)
DeleteMy 3 to wind up
ReplyDelete11A - {O{(-h)(-ut)}LIVE}
26A - OFFSI(-t+d)DE
5D - CERISE(-v)*
11a is the least satisfactory of the clues. Someone had the answer but did not enter it here as the anno was not forthcoming.
DeleteI too had it but left me unmoved.
Deepak, even with your anno, I am unable to see how it works.
Besides, the use of 'Live' in the clue sentence when the answer is OLIVE is a drawback, I think.
This criticism is not meant to be destructiive.
I saw it like this
DeleteLive longer = OUTLIVE
outside = Deletion indicator
roofless hut = (-h)UT
for
fruit = OUTLIVE - (-h)ut = OLIVE
Oh I see. That didn't strike me!
DeleteThanks, Deepak.
I read it like this-
DeleteLive longer- Outlive
outside- removal indicator
roofless hut- ut
(Outlive- ut) leads to Olive
Precisely what was intended.
DeleteTo think it didn't strike Chaturvasi, though! :)
Good one. Thanks Col. for the anno.
DeleteArigato gozaimasu, everyone.
ReplyDeleteIt was an exciting debut day for me!
Thanks Battosai and as Spock would say
DeleteDif-tor heh smusma (Live long and prosper)
General feedback.
ReplyDeleteSome more variety in clue types may be tried.
I wonder if we have hidden (telescopic), palindrome, homophone, cryptic def and similar clue-types. (I have not made a conscious clue by clue analysis.)
The clue variety can be achieved only if we keep track of clue types used while we write the required 30 clues.
Perhaps we need to keep an eye on that aspect even when we fill the grid. The first entries in the grid might be three or four words which would yield to such clue types and then fill the rest of the blank celss. The other fills can always be tackled with the use of charades - which might usually dominate a crossword.
Sure, thanks! :)
DeleteAfter the General feedback, it is time for Colonel feedback
DeleteColonel feedback already given before general feedback to maintain rank structure ;-)
DeleteWill try better next time! :)
ReplyDeleteA small suggestion:
ReplyDeleteUnnecessary false capitalisation has been used to give away word play components. Eg:26a, 8d. That almost makes one feel that the setter kept them for reminding himself/herself, but forgot to remove later.
They were actually there to make sure the clues were fair.
DeleteFor example, the solver had no way to know that tetanus stand only for t, while necrosis stands only for n, in 8D. So it was like a clue, inside a clue. I tried to stick to Ximenian clue-ing, but...
Joining in late. Re General feedback and Colonel feedback...
ReplyDeleteIt gives a feeling of being in the Regimented Society of Bloggers... :)
Your absence today was a Major problem...
Delete4:12 Call it capital punishment...
ReplyDelete4:42 Your absence today was a Major problem...
ReplyDeleteYes, that is because I commissioned myself very late...
521,526 combined: we found urselves headless !
Delete